Reflecting


beauty comes in twos
still water, ponds and puddles
prove we take up space

7 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

And how we love that affirmation!
Writing in Faith: Poems

Anonymous said...

'still water, ponds and puddles' makes me want to go find one to jump in! I used to love splashing my sisters when I was young!

Anonymous said...

I like how you suddenly brought the logic of a proof into this poem. It was very unexpected.

Anonymous said...

I like the concreteness of it!

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Raven said...

I'm not sure I agree with you, but you say it so nicely that I almost have to. Lots of lovely haikus at art work here. I especially liked your Desert/Deserted up at the top of the page.

Anonymous said...

beauty comes in twos_ the twos in the human body and elsewhere in Nature certainly seem to buttress ur argument..thanks..

Anonymous said...

hmmm...still thinking abt it...