And how we love that affirmation!Writing in Faith: Poems
'still water, ponds and puddles' makes me want to go find one to jump in! I used to love splashing my sisters when I was young!
I like how you suddenly brought the logic of a proof into this poem. It was very unexpected.
I like the concreteness of it!reflected changes
I'm not sure I agree with you, but you say it so nicely that I almost have to. Lots of lovely haikus at art work here. I especially liked your Desert/Deserted up at the top of the page.
beauty comes in twos_ the twos in the human body and elsewhere in Nature certainly seem to buttress ur argument..thanks..
hmmm...still thinking abt it...
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And how we love that affirmation!
Writing in Faith: Poems
'still water, ponds and puddles' makes me want to go find one to jump in! I used to love splashing my sisters when I was young!
I like how you suddenly brought the logic of a proof into this poem. It was very unexpected.
I like the concreteness of it!
reflected changes
I'm not sure I agree with you, but you say it so nicely that I almost have to. Lots of lovely haikus at art work here. I especially liked your Desert/Deserted up at the top of the page.
beauty comes in twos_ the twos in the human body and elsewhere in Nature certainly seem to buttress ur argument..thanks..
hmmm...still thinking abt it...
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