infinite humming
countless stars and galaxies
creator's love song
Sung into being...the cosmic shout of the creator
Forth, and back...
Out...and in...A dust spec compared to everything...and nothing.
Singing the organic universe...the life opera...
And me....just trying to remember my lines.
17 comments:
"Creator's love song..." What a lovely concept. Beautiful.
Excellent! Nebulae are so fascinating and your words are wonderful!
What a view! And, you poem fits it well.
These are beauiful words and flow like a melody. Love the 'Creator's love song'.
I love that you chose to invoke the symphony of the universe. I read about a composer who has worked with the hum from the universe and written a symphony. This is fascinating.
The love song of the creator is a delightful, magical, happy image. Thanks.
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'creator's love song' is just beautiful! as well as 'Singing the organic universe'... I am also just trying to remember my lines! Wonderful!
Thank you all so much for the kind and encouraging expressions. You are a great group of folks!
This is an actual huble image and there are many incredible shots of the further reaches....it's just humbling to look through these. just google huble images for choices.
..thank u for 'the symphony of the universe'..
"And me....just trying to remember my lines." Oh, yes, :-D, for sure!
infinite humming... every night, every day... there it is a melodic humming of the universe... so poetically placed as the creators love song... thank you..
This is quite lovely in it's lazy free form. A beautiful Nebulea, like the slowly opening center and essence of the nature of one single flower. Excellent.
love-bd
so beautiful
It does fill one with humility to consider our role in the universe!
Excellent Poem.
Thank You.
Beautiful melody of the creator's love song.
...glad you enjoyed the largeness...smallness of this poem...thanks for the feedback all!
I just love this haiku. The nebula looks great with it too.
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